Monday, 15 July 2013

Oral Practice - Tan Jian Hui

Oral Practice


1 comment:

  1. Reading: Good. Perhaps you could slow down and have more emphasis on the speeches such as "poor chap" it was read a tad bit too fast. Tone was a bit monotonous though there is some variation.

    Picture: Good sentence structure. Good detailed description and inferences. Though part a could be developed further such as including some thoughts from seeing such a scene. The second portion has well supported points with concrete examples.

    - Rayner